一、内容简介：

《施工方法说明》（水电工程）全书共12个章节，总字数为48，600字，共十二节内容，其主要内容是介绍公司为取得工程项目所做出的施工方案说明，译者翻译的第七章，共计15，576字。译者翻译的部分主要是关于排水闸和泄洪闸的施工介绍说明，其中介绍了工程概况、施工部署及进度计划安排、为顺利施工做的一系列准备以及主要施工方法。工程概况介绍了施工主体的结构设计特点、施工条件及施工难点，是对一个工程项目全面而简洁描述，为施工参与人员和读者提供一个关于项目基本情况和主要特点的概览。

二、译文修改：

例1

ST：先深后浅，先中部后两边，先底部后上部，先闸室、消力池后铺盖、护坦。井点降水、闸塘开挖同时进行。

TT1:From the deep foundation to the shallow one; middle part first and both sides then; from the bottom part to the upper part; gate clamber and stilling basin first and the apron then, and well point dewatering and sluice pond excavation shall be operated simultaneously.

TT2: From the deep foundation to the shallow one; from the central area to the sides; from the bottom part to the top; gate clamber and stilling basin first and followed by the apron. Well point dewatering and sluice pond excavation shall be carried out simultaneously.

例2

ST：为了防止模板走动变形，在闸室内搭设满堂脚手支撑，纵横钢管间距为1m左右，同时也准确控制闸室的尺寸，闸室墙墩的模板以扣件、钢管依付于闸室内满堂脚手支撑固定，墙墩厚度以止水对销螺栓控制。

TT1: To prevent the deformation of the formworks, and control the size of the gate chamber, a scaffolding with full framing shall be set up in the gate chamber. The spacing of vertical and horizontal steel pipes is about 1m. The formworks for the gate chamber wall piers shall be fixed with fasteners and steel pipes attached to the scaffolding inside the gate chamber, and the thickness of the wall pier is controlled by the sealing counter bolt.

TT2：To prevent the deformation of the formwork, a scaffolding with full framing shall be set up in the gate chamber, the spacing of vertical and horizontal steel pipes is about 1m. And to control the size of the gate chamber, the formworks for the gate chamber wall piers shall be fixed with fasteners and steel pipes attached to the scaffolding inside the gate chamber, and the thickness of the wall pier is controlled by the sealing counter bolt.

例3

ST：为确保墩墙的厚度，按每层横围檩的位置布置对拉止水螺栓，对拉止水螺栓水平距离60厘米左右。螺栓的长度按墩壁的厚度加墙筋的厚度加钢管横围檩的直径加钢垫片的厚度加螺帽的厚度再加每边不少于2厘米确定。螺栓的直径可选用ф14～16普园钢筋。

TT1: In order to ensure the thickness of the pier wall, split sealing bolts shall be arranged according to the position of each layer of the horizontal steel pipe purlin with a horizontal distance of about 60 centimeters. The length of the bolt is determined by the thickness of the pier wall, reinforcement, the steel gasket, the screw nut, and the diameter of the steel pipe purlin and not less than 2cm on each side. The bolt of universal steel bar can be ф14～16 in diameter.

TT2: In order to ensure the thickness of the pier wall, split sealing bolts shall be arranged according to the position of each layer of the horizontal steel pipe purlin with a horizontal distance of about 60 centimeters. The length of the bolt is determined by adding the thickness of reinforcement plus the thickness of the steel gasket, plus the thickness of the screw nut, and the diameter of the steel pipe purlin, plus not less than 2 cm on each side. The bolt of universal steel bar can be ф14～16 in diameter.

三、研讨反思：

通过此次研讨我学习到对于科技文本的翻译，更应该注意用词的准确性和规范性，词汇的翻译是最基本的翻译，如果专业术语出现错误，译文的意思就会与源文本截然不同。对于译文信息重复的地方翻译前应先梳理汉语，通过合并、重塑、简化或使用指示代词等方式，在保持信息一致性的同时避免冗余。并且科技文本的翻译应采用规范性的科学文本表达风格，避免口语话和不客观的用词，例如最开始译文出现的“then” “what’s more”。此外，本人在翻译过程中也存在对源文本理解出现偏差的情况，擅自将译文前后并列，改变了原文意思，译者在后续撰写过程中将搜索较为权威的搜索引擎、学术网站，对源文本所涉及到的专业知识进行查漏补缺，同时加强审核校对，从语法正确性、拼写标点规范、术语统一、风格连贯性等多层面细致检查译文，纠正初稿中的低级错误，优化表达生硬、逻辑不清之处，对存疑译文反复斟酌修改。